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Falcon

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  With eyes caught on my target, talons outstretched and wings tucked tightly into my sides, I dive.
    
Wind whistles through my feathers, I feel alive now more than ever.

My prey, so unaware and naive swims through the sparkling crystal waters.

I feel bad for it almost, but this is instinct and my chicks were waiting.
    
 The only sound the kill made was when my talons breached the water.

I made it quick and seized my prize.

After all someday I could be the fish and the fish the falcon.
Creative title I know, but here it is! 'Tis another in my AFP (Animal First Person) writing series. Hope you will like :blush:

Animal: Falcon.

Time: 1hr. (accumulated editing time)

Inspiration: the circle of life. <--Lion King Moment.. :giggle:


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Desert Rain   Lightning flashes, illuminating the shadowed sky.

Rains will come soon, bringing life to this desolate land. But how long the reprieve would last no one could be sure.

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My sharp claws latch into the dust, and bring bursts of speed into my stride. The chase is on.
   
Another flash. My prey is lit for a fraction of a second. As it turns to look back, fear shines in its eyes. It desperately pushes itself on, trying to go faster.

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